Please critique my riding?

your arab is gorgeous, id love to have her. the only things i see wrong are the ones you've listed, your going a bit too forward, not too much though, so good job, your leg swings back, your heels aren't down enough, and you aren't even releasing! your reins are so tight! definately release more, i would first worry about getting your legs at the girth and releasing more then the heels then the upper body